Monday, 8 April 2013

The Canadian Bomb Threat Part 4


                                                           The Canadian Bomb Threat
                                                                           Part 4
                                                                             Tara


When Tara saw her brother being kiddnapped she screamed so loud it even suprised her.Then it was all over, and her
brother was gone. Lucy fell to her knees and started to cry along with Tara. Whiel they were crying Tara thought to
herself " Crying isn't going to help Carter escape where ever his was". So with that Tara stood up and took Lucy's hand
and said" Come on Lucy lets go back to my parents and tell them what happened to......... She couldn't say Carters name
otherwise she would break down in tears. So she and Lucy went back to Tara's parents house and told them what had
happened to Carter. Tara's Mom burst into tears while her Dad patted her on the back. Dad said" Tara are you sure of
what you saw"? Tara said" Dad of course im sure of what I saw, Lucy saw it too!!! Dad said" Okay dear, no need to get
upset about this". "Upset said Tara? Dad Carter is gone! Shouldn't we call the police"? Mom sniffled" Tara dear we already
called them and they are on the way here to question you and Lucy. "Is that all right with you Lucy, said Tara"? But when
Tara turned around Lucy was gone!!!!      

                                                               TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!

3 comments:

  1. Great job Eric! Looking forward to the next one! Nathan

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  2. All fans!!!
    I am writing the last part of this story.
    When im done what kind of story should i write next?
    Leave your sudgestions here.

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  3. Same idea just in the Yukon with the Alaska pipeline. Same or differnt characters.Nathan.

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